my day Hello, my dear friends. This is a diary of mine, I am happy to share my life story with you. Today, in the morning, i waked uo with a nightmare, although i forget that nightmare now, I know tha

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my day Hello, my dear friends. This is a diary of mine, I am happy to share my life story with you. Today, in the morning, i waked uo with a nightmare, although i forget that nightmare now, I know that I was not in a good mood in that nightmare. And then, I went to the class after my breakfast, in fact of matter, i do not like the two teachers of classes every Friday. I think they can not teach us students verywell, I say such that because we students never understand what the two teachers want to teach systematically. It just took my 10 minutes from our classroom to our mess hall when I went to have a lunch after class. AND my favorite steamed eggs was too salted to eat.Next,my friend Yang Tong, whose English name is Mary, and I took a walk so that we can comfortably take a nap. In the afternoon, i studied the knowledge points of teacher qualification test, I think maybe i else will become teacher, but ~ About 6 pm. to 8:30 pm. Mary and I went to shopping in the supermarket by walk, that because Mary was in a bad mood, and I wanted to accompany her to talk a walk to get her out of the bad mood.By the way,Mary is a kindhearted, honest and pious girl, I aways think she is a artist, I also think you would like her,too, if you are acquainted with her. Back to the bormitory, I had a dinner, at the same time, I was watching The Lwgend of 1900.I like this movie very very very much. 2016-10-21 is coming to the end, and I knew "under the sun" maybe not means "all over the world", maybe my junior high school English teacher and I took a mistake. FINALY, I must to THANK Holly Spiess for her revise yesterday.

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My day

Hello, my dear friends. This is a diary of mine, I am happy to share my life story with you.

This morning, I woke up with a nightmare, although I have forgotten that nightmare now, I know that I was not in a good mood in that nightmare. And then, I went to class after my breakfast, as a matter of fact, I do not like the two teachers who teach classes every Friday. I think they can not teach us students very well, I say such that because we students never understand what the two teachers want to teach systematically.

It just took me 10 minutes from our classroom to our mess hall when I went to have a lunch after class. AND my favorite steamed eggs was too salty to eat. Next, my friend Yang Tong, whose English name is Mary, and I took a walk so that we could comfortably take a nap.
In the afternoon, I studied the knowledge points for the teacher qualification test, I think maybe I will become teacher, but ~
About 6 pm. to 8:30 pm. Mary and I walked to the supermarket to go shopping, because Mary was in a bad mood, and I wanted to accompany her to talk and walk to get her out of her bad mood. By the way, Mary is a kindhearted, honest and pious(?) girl, I always think she is an artist, I also think you would like her, too, if you were acquainted with her.

Back to the dormitory, I had a dinner and at the same time I was watching The Legend of 1900. I like this movie very very very much. 2016-10-21 is coming to an end, and I know "under the sun" maybe doesn't mean "all over the world", maybe my junior high school English teacher and I made a mistake.
FINALLY, I must THANK Holly Spiess for her correction yesterday.

Hello Hannah,

It sounds like you had a really busy day, I hope you managed to get your friend out of her bad mood!

'I think you would like her too if you were acquainted with her.' is a hypothetical (second) conditional so you should use 'if + past simple, would + infinitive'. 'wake' is an irregular verb, its forms are wake, woke, woken. There are also some spelling mistakes.

Remember to put a space after all commas and full stops and 'I' in front of a verb is always a capital (big) 'I', even if it is not at the start of a sentence.

Hope this helps

Bob

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