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Antarctic I prepared a presentation and I am going to present it. Can you correct my writing please ? ANTARCTIC / SOUTH POLE I benefited from a scientist writing in a web site. He kept a journal of his scientific expedition to the Sout Pole, Antarctic. Antarctic is a where any country doesn't have alone rightful owner continent. There is a agreement protect this pole. Under this agreement the signature of the 53 countries have. 24 countries are just observer and other 28 countries are rightful owner for Antarctic's future. Turkey is observer now. This agreement is only allowed scientific research. Thanks to it, any weapons was never on this continent, but until 2048. It is going to finish that year. Warship can research and pass from there by dismantle the weapons. I guess, Antarctic the only continent where there is no war. People use icebreaker to reach up there. It's lenght is nearly 85 metres. There are some differences between South and North Pole. South Pole is colder than. It consists piece of land. It is a continent. Oneof the seven continents but North Pole consists of ice, just a big ice. There are no a lot of ices afloat. But in South Pole, there are a lot of ice afload. That's way South Pole is colder than North Pole. Weather in South Pole is under the influence of warm oceanic climate. Penguins live in South Pole. Penguins are fast swimmer and they can be plunget in thought 170 metres. Ice bears live in North Pole. And icebergs. They are so dangerious for ship. A little part is afload and very big part is underwater. You know titanic hit a iceberg. Leopard seals are carnivore and dangerous for people too. Specialist in Antarctic warn nonspecislist who come there. They say if you see them hold aloof am move away. Their mouth is curling upward. They have smiling face but it's lie. %90 of the world's ice is Antarctic. They found lakes under the ice and on the land. Climate and water course in the world consist of ices in Antarctic. Weather is changeable. It can change fast. You can see some weather in a day. People have a check up before they go. Check up is continue all the research in South Pole. Research stations elctrise from wind rose. They are also used as model for long space travel. And lastly some people come as a tourist and do sport.

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Antarctic

I prepared a presentation and I am going to present it. Can you correct my writing please ?

Antarctic / South Pole
I benefited from a scientist writing on a website. He kept a journal of his scientific expedition to the South Pole, Antarctic.
The Antarctic is that continent where no single country is the rightful owner. There is an international agreement to protect this zone. Under this agreement are the signatories of 53 countries, of which 24 are just observers and the other 29 countries are the rightful owners of Antarctic's future. Turkey is an observer now. This agreement only allows scientific research. Thanks to it, any weapons are never on this continent, but only until 2048 when it will finish.
Warships can research and pass from there if they disable their weapons. I guess the Antarctic the only continent where there is no war.
People use icebreakers to navigate. They are nearly 85 metres long.
There are some differences between the South and North Pole. The South Pole is colder. It consists of a piece of land. It is a continent; one of the seven continents but the North Pole consists solely of ice. There are just lots of ice floes. But in the South Pole, there are a lot of icebergs. That's why the South Pole is colder than the North Pole. Weather at the South(North?=Gulf stream?) Pole is under the influence of warm oceanic climate.
Penguins live at the South Pole. Penguins are fast swimmers and they can plunge to 170 metres depths. Polar bears live at the North Pole.
And icebergs. They are so dangerous for ships. A little part is afloat (1/9) and very big part is underwater (8/9). You know the Titanic hit an iceberg.
Leopard seals are carnivores and dangerous for people too. Specialists in Antarctic warn non specialists who come there. They say if you see them hold aloof they will move away. Their mouth is curling upward. They have a smiling face but it's a lie.
90% of the world's ice is at the Antarctic.
They found lakes under the ice and on the land.
Climate and water course in the world consist of ices in Antarctic.(?)
The weather is changeable and can change fast. You can see some weather in a day.
People have a check up before they go. Check ups continue for all the researchers at the South Pole.
Research stations power their electricity from the wind. They are also used as model for long space travel.
And lastly some people come there as tourists and do sport.

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Antarctic

I prepared a presentation and I am going to present it. Can you correct my writing, please ?

Antarctic / South Pole
I benefited from a scientist writing on  a website He kept a journal of his scientific expedition to the Sout Pole, Antarctic.
Antarctic is a where any country doesn't have alone rightful owner continent. There is an agreement protect this pole. Under this agreement the signature of the 53 countries have. 24 countries are the just observer and other 28 countries are a  rightful owner for Antarctic's future. Turkey is observer now. This agreement is only allowed scientific research. Thanks to it, any weapons was never on this continent, but until 2048. It is going to finish that year.
The  Warship can research and pass from there by dismantling   the weapons. I guess Antarctic the only continent where there is no war.
People use  an icebreaker to reach up there. Its length is nearly 85 metres.
There are some differences between South and North Pole. the  South Pole is colder than. It consists piece of land. It is a continent. one of  the seven continents but  the North Pole consists of ice, just a big ice. There are no a lot of ices afloat. But in  the South Pole, there are a lot of ice afloat . That's a  way  the  South Pole is colder than the North Pole. Weather in the   South Pole is under the influence of warm oceanic climate.
Penguins live in the South Pole. Penguins are the  fast swimmer and they can be plunged   in thought 170 metres. Ice bears live in  the North Pole.
And icebergs. They are so dangerous  for ship. A little part is afloat  and very big part is underwater. You know titanic hit an  iceberg.
Leopard seals are carnivore and dangerous for people too. Specialist in Antarctic warns   nonspecialist  who come there. They say if you see them hold aloof am move away. Their mouth is curling upward. They have smiling face but it's a  lie.
%90 of the world's ice is Antarctic.
They found lakes under the ice and on the land.
Climate and water course in the world consist of ices in Antarctic.
Weather is changeable. It can change fast. You can see some weather in a day.
People have a check up before they go. Check up is continue all the research in  the South Pole.
Research electric stations  from the  wind rose. They are also used as a  model for long space travel.
And lastly, some people come as a tourist and do sport.

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