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I love my Mum Last vacation,My family went to my mother's house.We took four hours on the way.My parents were very glad because they saw their grandson(my son). The most importent thing that I went home was harvest.I hoped I can help them as much as I can.They have planted a lot.Most of the farm already finshed the harvest.The lefted work was the diffcult one.When we were working,we were chating.I found that Mum was so struggling . She hoped she can help us more ,and she still wanted we can help them on finacement. Maybe she was old and sick somewhere .She was disaportent and complaint .Sometimes I don't know how to console her . I don't what will happen in other country . In China ,they have paied a lot for my university .We were lived countryside.So it's very hard for them to earn money .But they were much better than some other parents .When I could go to university ,they were so happy .They thought everything will be good like one of my grandfathers .Actually ,things have changed many years. Not all the colledge students can get good job when they graduated .Then they worried about my marriage .When I got married ,they worried about my life .Only a few years after I graduated ,I didn't earn a lot money .Sometimes I felt about them. Seems like I owned them a lot of money .Sometimes I will think it's ok. I hope I can help them more .Saving some money incase they need.

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I love my Mum

Last vacation my family went to my mother's house. We took four hours to get there. My parents were very glad because they saw their grandson (my son).
The most important thing that I went home for was the harvest. I hoped I could help them as much as possible. They had planted a lot. Most of the farm had already finished the harvest. The remaining work was the difficult part. When we were working, we were chatting. I found that Mum was struggling a lot. She hoped to help us more and (she still wanted for us to help them financially.?) Maybe she was somewhat old and sick. She was disappointed and complained. Sometimes I don't know how to console her.
I don't know what will happen in another country . In China they have payed a lot for my university . We lived in the countryside so it was very hard for them to earn money but they were much better off than some other parents .When I could go to university they were so happy .They thought everything will be good like it was for one of my grandfathers .Actually things have changed after many years. Not all college students can get good jobs when they graduate. Then they worried about my marriage .When I got married they worried about my life .Only a few years after I graduated I didn't earn a lot money .Sometimes I felt for them. It seemed like I owed them a lot of money .Sometimes I think it will be ok. I hope I can help them more and save some money for them in case they need it.

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*The most important thing i went home for was harvest season. I hoped to help them as much as i could. (Can in past is could) They HAD planted a lot. The LEFTOVER work was the difficult one...

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I love my Mum

Last vacation,My family went to my mother's house.We took four hours on the way.My parents were very glad because they saw their grandson(my son).
The most importent thing that I went home was harvest.I hoped I can help them as much as I can.They have planted a lot.Most of the farm already finshed the harvest.The lefted work was the diffcult one.When we were working,we were chating.I found that Mum was so struggling . She hoped she can help us more ,and she still wanted we can help them on finacement. Maybe she was old and sick somewhere .She was disaportent and complaint .Sometimes I don't know how to console her .
I don't what will happen in other country . In China ,they have paied a lot for my university .We were lived countryside.So it's very hard for them to earn money .But they were much better than some other parents .When I could go to university ,they were so happy .They thought everything will be good like one of my grandfathers .Actually ,things have changed many years. Not all the colledge students can get good job when they graduated .Then they worried about my marriage .When I got married ,they worried about my life .Only a few years after I graduated ,I didn't earn a lot money .Sometimes I felt about them. Seems like I owned them a lot of money .Sometimes I will think it's ok. I hope I can help them more .Saving some money incase they need.

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