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VISIT NEW PLACES(Please cortrect me, This is a homework from the University) I like to visit a lot interesting places around Ecuador. I consider to visit new places is stunning, because, when I visit new brilliant places, I have the opportunity to know new people, also new customs and new language. I think to visit is perfect to know the reality or situation of each town. It permits me try to comprise all culture and respect them, because each ravishing culture has different ways to see the world. When I visit beautiful places, obviously all places have Ecuador are incredible, however I prefer to visit Amazon Region, because there are a lot of wonderful landscapes and when I am there I feel free and I love see many different kind of beautiful birds and animals, so I enjoy to visit new places and I can hear the sing of the birds. All places around Ecuador are attractive to visit and I can see what kinds of plants we have in our forest and can see how many creeks there are in the forest, it is really fantastic. When I am in Wondrous point of view I like to take too many photographs. Please, correct it, Thanks in advance.

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VISITING  NEW PLACES(Please correct me, This is a piece of homework from University)

I like to visit a lot of interesting places around Ecuador. I consider to visiting new places is to be stunning because, when I visit new brilliant places, I have the opportunity to know meet new people, also as well as new customs and new languages. I think to visiting is the perfect way to know the reality or situation of each town. It permits me try to comprise understand all cultures and respect them, because each ravishing (Use different word) culture has different ways to see of viewing the world.

When I visit beautiful places, obviously all the places have Ecuador has are incredible, however I prefer to visit the Amazon Region, because there are a lot of wonderful landscapes and when I am there I feel free and I love seeing many different kinds of beautiful birds and animals, so I enjoy to visit new places and I can hear the singing of the birds. All places around Ecuador are attractive to visit and I can see what kinds of plants we have in our forest and can see how many creeks there are in the forest, it is really fantastic. When I am in wondrous points of view,  I like to take to take many photographs.
Please, correct it, Thanks in advance.
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VISITING NEW PLACES(note; titles are not usually all CAPS, only the first letter of each word)(Please correct me, This is a homework from the university)

I like to visit a lot interesting places around Ecuador. I consider to visiting new places is to be stunning(better: fascinating), because, when I visit new brilliant(better:interesting) places, I have the opportunity to know meet new people, and also to learn of new customs and new languages. I think to visit visiting is the perfect way to get to know the reality or situation(better: true nature) of each town. It permits me to try to understand comprise all cultures and respect them, because each ravishing culture has different ways to see the world.

When I visit beautiful places, obviously all places have Ecuador are incredible, however I prefer to visit Amazon Region, because there are a lot of wonderful landscapes and when I am there I feel free and I love see many different kind of beautiful birds and animals, so I enjoy to visit new places and I can hear the sing of the birds(see note). All places around Ecuador are attractive to visit(You are repeating your first sentence.) and I enjoy seeing can see what  the different kinds of plants we have in our forest and can to see how many creeks there are in the forest. It is really fantastic. When I am have a in wondrous point of view I like to take too many photographs.
Please, correct it. Thanks in advance.

Note: this is a really long sentence that should be broken up. Maybe: "All of Ecuador is beautiful, but when I visit new places, I prefer to visit the Amazon Region. There are lots of wonderful landscapes there and when I am there I feel free. I love to see the different animals and birds there, and to hear the birds sing.


Good job.  You make me want to visit Ecuador!

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