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Should I give up?
Today, I made a hard decision which has bothered me for almost one and a half months. I gave up an opportunity of going to University of California, Santa Barbara for a semester (about 76 days). I intended to take this chance to experience foreign culture and especially practice speaking English. However, I have other stuff to tackle like preparing for my graduate dissertation and the next-year civil servants selecting examination. Also, I am afraid 76 days is too short for me to improve my English. After considering, I decided to give up this opportunity and focus on my destination and the coming examination. Does this decision seem right? Will I regret it?Should I give up?
Today, I made a hard decision which has bothered me for almost one and a half months. I gave up an opportunity to go to the University of California, Santa Barbara for one semester of study (about 76 days). I intended to take this chance to experience foreign culture and especially practices my spoken English. However, I have a lot of other stuff to tackle, like preparing for my graduate dissertation and next year's civil service selection examination. Meanwhile, I am afraid 76 days are too short for me to improve my English. After considering it, I decided to give up this opportunity and focus on my destination and the coming examination. Dose Is this decision right? Would Will I regret for it?~~~
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Should I give up?
Today, I made a hard decision which has bothered me for almost one and a half months. I gave up an opportunity of going to University of California, Santa Barbara for one semester study (about 76 days). I intended to take this chance to experience foreign culture and especially practices my speaking English. However, I have many other staff to tackle like preparing for my graduate dissertation and the next-year civil servants selecting examination and meanwhile I am afraid 76 days are too short for me to improve my English. After considering, I decided to give up this opportunity and focus on my destination and the coming examination. Dose this decision right? Would I regret for it?(Corrections In Red)
Should I give up?
Today, I made a hard decision which has bothered me for almost one and a half months. I gave up an opportunity of going to the University of California, Santa Barbara for one semester study (about 76 days). I intended to take this chance to experience foreign culture and especially practice my spoken English. However, I have many other things to tackle like preparing for my graduate dissertation and the next-year civil servants selecting examination and meanwhile I am afraid 76 days are too short for me to improve my English. After considering it, I decided to give up this opportunity and focus on my destination and the coming examination. is this decision right? Will I regret it?
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