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Meat dish Today my mom bought some pork to eat. I like to eat pork dish. I like pork more than beef. Pork is delicious. However, to eat too much pork is not good. If I eat too much pork, I will become fat. So I will eat pork less of it.

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Meat dish

Today my  mom bought some pork to eat. I like to eat pork dish. I like pork more than beef. Pork is delicious. However, to eat too much pork is not good. If I eat too much pork, I will become fat. So I will eat pork less of it.

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Today my mum bought some pork to eat. I like to eat pork. I like pork more than beef. Pork is delicious. However, if you eat too much then pork isn't good. If I eat too much pork, I will become fat. So I will eat less of it.

(By the way Mom isn't exactly a mistake. It's just American English not British English that's why the word mom  is a mistake to me because In the UK we say mum not mom.)

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Meat dish

Today my mom bought some pork to eat. I like to eat pork dishes. I like pork more than beef. Pork is delicious. However, to eat too much pork is not good. If I eat too much pork, I will become fat. So I will eat pork less of it.

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