Pen pal
I recently read a book: 84,the charing cross street. Helene and Frank had keep writing letters for 20 years, it makes me envy. I also want to have a pen Pal, I will insist on sending letters. In this era of Internet developed, though email can be sent to the other mailbox for a few seconds, but writing can reflect each other's mood, more can see the other person's handwriting. Waiting makes expectation.
If you want a pen pal, please send a message for me. Thanks;)
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Pen pal
I recently read a book: 84,the Charing Cross Road street. Helene and Frank [had* keep kept on writing]/wrote/exchanged letters for 20 years, it makes me envious/fills me with envy. I also want to have a pen pal, I will insist on sending letters. In this era of the Internet developed, though email can be sent to the other mailbox for in a few seconds, but* writing can reflect each other's mood, as more you can see the other person's handwriting. Waiting makes/increases expectation/anticipation.If you want a pen pal, please send a message for to me. Thanks;)
* '. . had kept on writing' when you are using the phrase to set the scene for, or to qualify [place conditions on], another action e.g. 'Helene and Frank had kept on writing to each other throughout their adult lives, but had never met in person.' The other action does not have to be in the same sentence.
* the word 'but' is not necessary here as you have already used 'though'; if you omit [leave out] 'though' in the first clause, then use 'but' in the second clause : 'In this era of the internet, email can be sent to the other mailbox in a few seconds, but writing can reflect each other's mood . .'
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