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What do you need to get a job? (Help me with this text pleasee) How difficult could it be getting a job? The answer would change depending on our age, qualifications and experience. I am new in the job market. For that reason, I was looking for some information related to that issue and I found useful pieces of advice. As everyone knows, if our goal is to get a job we have to build a resume. The internet is full of information about how to create an impressive resume. However, it would be a disadvantage not to have the qualifications, knowledge or experience required by certain position. It could happen that our lack of experience, owing to the fact that we have never work in another place, make things more difficult. Companies always value the experience of the employee, then it would be a good idea to start volunteering for an organization that focuses in something that fits with our interests. In the beginning, you probably do easy tasks, but little by little you will be given more responsibilities. Apart from the experience, studying or updating your knowledge about the use of some software that is asked in the job that you want to apply will give you some points in your favor. At this point, you already have the qualification which will show you as an appealing candidate. Having said that, you still have to pass the job interview. This could be the most stressful part because it includes one previous step: be part of the interview. Many people send their resumes so that you cannot be count among the interviewers. Apart from that, it is well-known that having influences could determine whether hire someone or not. Having a friend, relative or anyone else that can give you a hand with this is a plus. That is the reason why social networks like LinkedIn are becoming more and more popular. To sum up, nowadays it is not only important to have the qualification for certain job, but to know some contacts that can ease the demanding process of being hired.

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What do you need to get a job? (Help me with this text pleasee)

How difficult could it be getting a job? The answer would change depending on our age, qualifications and experience. I am new in the job market. For that reason, I was looking for some information related to that issue, and I found useful pieces of advice.

As everyone knows, if our  the goal is to get a job,  it is necessary to build a resume. The internet is full of information about how to create an impressive resume. However, it would be a disadvantage not to have the qualifications, knowledge or experience required by for a  certain position. It could be happen that our  a lack of experience, owing to the fact that we have one has never worked in another place, make could make things more difficult. Companies always value the experience of the employee.   Then it would be a good idea to start volunteering for an organization that focuses on something that fits (or aligns) with our  an applicant's interests. In the beginning, easier tasks might be assigned followed by more challenging responsibilities. . Apart from the experience, studying or updating your on'e  knowledge about the use of some software required for that is asked in the job to which that you   one wants to apply will  enhance the applicant's credentials.

At this point, the applicant should have the required qualifications making he/she the ideal candidate.   Having said that,  there is still the job interview. This could be the most stressful part, because it includes one critical previous step: to be part of the interview. Many people send their resumes so that they you cannot be count among the interviewers. (I do not understand what you are trying to say here) Apart from that, it is well-known that having inside contacts influences could determine whether a candidate is hired someone or not. Having a friend, relative or anyone else that can help give you a hand with this is a plus. That is the reason why social networks like LinkedIn are becoming more and more popular.

To sum up, nowadays it is not only important to have the qualifications for certain job, but to know some contacts that can ease the demanding process of being hired.

Your paragraphs are very nice.  There were few errors, but I felt like you are ready for the next step and I boosted the wording.



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What do you need to get a job? (Help me with this text pleasee)

How difficult could it be getting a job? The answer would vary depending on our age, qualifications and experience. I am new in the job market. For that reason, I was looking for some information related to that issue and I found some useful pieces of advice.

As everyone knows, if our goal is to get a job we have to write a resume. The internet is full of information about how to create an impressive resume. However, it would be a disadvantage not to have the qualifications, knowledge or experience required by a certain position. It could happen that our lack of experience, owing to the fact that we have never worked in another place, makes things more difficult. Companies always value the experience of the employee so it would be a good idea to start volunteering for an organization that focuses on something that fits with our interests. In the beginning, you probably do easy tasks, but little by little you will be given more responsibilities. Apart from the experience, studying or updating your knowledge about the use of some software that is asked for in the job that you want to apply for, will improve your resume.

At this point, you already have the qualification which shows you as a likely candidate. Having said that, you still have to pass the job interview. This could be the most stressful part because it includes one previous step: be part of the interview. Many people send their resumes so that you cannot count on being interviewed.(?) Apart from that, it is well-known that having influence can determine whether you are hired or not. Having a friend, relative or anyone else who can give you a hand with this is a plus. That is the reason why social networks like LinkedIn are becoming more and more popular.

To sum up, nowadays it is not only important to have the qualification for certain job, but to know some contacts that can ease the demanding process of being hired.

Very well written! You're hired! (not fired!)

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What do you need to get a job? 

How difficult could it be to get a job? The answer would differ depending on our age, qualifications and experience. I am new in the job market. For that reason, I was looking for some information related to that issue and I found useful pieces of advice.

As everyone knows, if our goal is to get a job we have to build a resume. The internet is full of information about how to create an impressive resume. However, you would be at disadvantage if you do not  have the qualifications, knowledge or experience required for certain position. It could happen that our lack of experience, owing to the fact that we have never worked in another place, make things more difficult.Since companies always value the experience of the employee, it would be a good idea for us to start volunteering for an organization that focuses in something that is aligned with our interests. In the beginning, you are probably given easy tasks, but gradually you will be given more responsibilities. Apart from the experience; developing your skills to use the softwares you would be expected to use for the job that you have applied for, will give you some points in your favor.

At this   that point, you will already have the qualification which will show make you an appealing candidate. Having said that, you still have to pass the job interview. This could be the most stressful part because it includes one previous important step: be part of the interview.Since many people send their resumes so that you cannot be count among the interviewers there are low chances that you will get an interview call. Apart from that, it is well-known that having strong referrals could determine whether someone is hired or not. Having a friend, relative or anyone else who could help or refer you can be very favorable for you. That is the prime reason why social networks like LinkedIn are becoming more and more popular.

To sum up, nowadays it is not only important to have the qualification for certain job, but to know some contacts that can ease the demanding process of being hired.

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