INFORMAL EMAIL.
Hi! I have writen and informal email for an exercise of my English-book. The purpose is to explain what we do in my city in the evenings to a student called Max. If you could correct me it would be great, thank you so much.
"Hi Max, nice to meet you!
It’s great that you are coming to Madrid! I’m sure you are going to have a good time here, it’s a great city with a lot of things to do. First of all, what are you studying? I’m studying Advertising and Public Relations in the University Complutense, so maybe we can go together in the subway in the mornings! Classes finish at 13.00 pm, so then, maybe we can go out for some drinks or something, Madrid has a lot of cheap and great pubs which are perfect for young people and students, just in case you like beer so much as I do. I think is a good plan for meet each other. In the evenings, people use to go to drink something in the terraces of the bars too and talk about different things, and then sometimes we go to some nightclub in the center. There is also some squares where you can find a lot of people drinking in the street, which is a perfect way to know different people and make friends, like "2 de Mayo Square" in Malasaña, although it’s not legal. Other place I like to go is Chueca, which is recognized as being the “gay zone”, people also drink in the street and have a good time with friends or other people, and the bars in that zone are great. Maybe you think is a lot of drinking, but well, we are young and you’re in Spain, so have fun!
Hope to see you!
Alba".
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INFORMAL EMAIL.
Hi! I have written and informal email for as an exercise of from my English-book. The purpose is to explain what we do in my city in the evenings to a student called Max. If you could correct me it would be great, thank you so much."Hi Max, nice to meet you!
It’s great that you are coming to Madrid! I’m sure you are going to have a good time here, it’s a great city with a lot of things to do. First of all, what are you studying? I’m studying Advertising and Public Relations in the University Complutense, so maybe we can go together in the subway in the mornings! Classes finish at 13.00 pm, so then, maybe we can go out for some drinks or something? Madrid has a lot of cheap and great pubs which are perfect for young people and students, just in case you like beer so as much as I do. I think it is a good plan for to meet each other. In the evenings, people use to go to drink something in the terraces of the bars too and talk about different things, and then sometimes we go to some nightclub in the center. There is also some squares where you can find a lot of people drinking in the street, which is a perfect way to know meet different people and make friends, like "2 de Mayo Square" in Malasaña, although it’s not legal. Another place I like to go is Chueca, which is recognised as being the “gay zone”, people also drink in the street and have a good time with friends or other people, and the bars in that zone are great. Maybe you think it is a lot of drinking, but well, we are young and you’re in Spain, so have fun!
Hope to see you!
Alba".
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