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at home today is holiday ,i and my family all at home .what we are doing in the holiday at home ?OK ,let me explaining . my home is not spacious and grand ,but it is cosy and comfortable ,so i love my home and my family very much .there are 4 people in my home ,my elder sister and my parents and me .i am the youngest at my home .why we are not going outside have a hand or shopping ?because is raining now ,so we have no idea ,just can pass the holiday at home .my father is reading newspaper on the sofa ,my mother is sewing cloth on the sofa too .my elder sister and me are watching television on the floor .what the television playing ?why me and my elder sister are cheering ? the answer is anime !we have been to watch anime for five years ,it is funny and that is my hobby .

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At home

Today is holiday. My family and I are all at home. What are we doing at home on holiday? OK, let me explain.
My home is not spacious and grand, but it is cosy and comfortable, so I love it very much. There are 4 people in my home, my elder sister, my parents and I. I am the youngest. Why aren't we out shopping? Because it is raining now, so we have no option but to stay at home. My father is reading the newspaper on the sofa, and my mother is sewing clothes on the sofa too. My elder sister and I are watching television on the floor. What is being played on Television and why my sister and I are cheering? The answer is anime! We have been watching anime for five years, it is my hobby and it is fun.


First of all, good job! I really like your tone, it's light and funny. However, you might want to pay more attention to punctuation "as shown in the correction above".

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