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致力于成功！ 我的中文名字是刘飞. 我是汉中，城固外籍教师 (2009-2011). 我现在住在美国. 我想讲流利的中文. 我要回到中国. 如果我能沟通，我总能享受中国. 我以后会多写.

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致力于成功！

我的中文名字是刘飞. 我是汉中市，城固县的一名外籍教师 (2009-2011). 我现在住在美国. 我想讲流利的中文. 我想要再次回到中国. 如果我能沟通，我总就能更好的享受中国了. 我以后会多写一些的.

 you speak Chinese well !
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看到很多朋友帮你修改了，我就不帮修改了，他们修改的很好。：） 加油。Have a good day.
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看到很多朋友帮你修改了，我就不帮修改了，他们修改的很好。：） 加油。Have a good day.
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看到很多朋友帮你修改了，我就不帮修改了，他们修改的很好。：） 加油。Have a good day.
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Words underlined should be deleted or substituted. (Comments in brackets) are not context but some notice. All my amendments are in black bold. It is my honor to help.


致力于成功！

我的中文名字是叫刘飞。我是来自汉中市城固县的外籍教师 (2009-2011)。我现在住在美国， 但是我想讲流利的中文。 我要就要回到中国， 如果我能用中文很好地沟通，我总就能享受中国的一切。 我以后会多写的。

I am glad your Chinese is really good, but you’d better pay more attention on your punctuations. The usage of punctuations in Chinese and in English is a little bit different. The period in Chinese is not a dot but a tiny circle. Lol. However, you did it well. Contact if you need more help in Chinese.

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