Underground Montreal
Montreal, a place where the temperature below zero or when the summer months are too hot, is possible to live here through underground city, because is the best way to escape the season; the city is 42 kilometres in downtown Montreal. Under Quebec's capital we can find big shopping malls, cinemas, theaters, art galeries, restaurants, hotels, museums, seven subway stations, and everything you can imagine.
The project was completed in 1962 with tunnels created to connect to the Central Station, but before other extensions were created to become in the most popular Montreal´s attraction because everyday is visited by quarter of a million people.
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Underground Montreal
Montreal: a place where when the temperature is below zero or when the summer months are too hot, it* is possible to live there through an underground city, because it* is the best way to escape the season; the city is 42 kilometres in downtown Montreal. Under Quebec's capital, we can find big shopping malls, cinemas, theaters, art galleries, restaurants, hotels, museums, seven subway stations, and everything you can imagine.The project was completed in 1962 with tunnels created to connect to the Central Station, but before** since then, other extensions were created to and has become*** in the most popular Montreal´s most popular attraction because everyday, it* is visited by a quarter of a million people.
*Subjects are not optional in English as they are in Spanish.
**"Before" doesn't work here because it would mean that the extensions were built before 1962, i.e. before the main system was completed.
***The extensions weren't created for the purpose of creating an attraction, so the logic of the sentence needed to be wordsmithed.
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I am afraid I haven't been able to correct the last paragraph of you composition as something wrong has happened to the correcting part . But I think it should be corrected as follows:
The project was completed with tunnels to connect it to the Central Station, but before other extensions were built to become one of the most popular Montreal's attractions because everyday it is visited by a quarter of a million people.
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Underground Montreal
Montreal, a place where the temperature below zero or when the summer months are too hot, is possible to live here through underground city, because is the best way to escape the season; the city is 42 kilometres in downtown Montreal. Under Quebec's capital we can find big shopping malls, cinemas, theaters, art galeries, restaurants, hotels, museums, seven subway stations, and everything you can imagine.The project was completed in 1962 with tunnels created to connect to the Central Station, but before other extensions were created to become in the most popular Montreal´s attraction because everyday is visited by quarter of a million people.
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