My Dream Came True; Northern Lights
First off, My dream came true yesterday. I, finally, looked up at Northern lights in Iceland. Gazing at the lights was always my dream....
Look back in 12 years ago, I lived in Toronto in Canada for three and half months, when I was 20 yeas old.
What I wanted to do was to go to Yellow Knife. Tee place is well-known as the best Aurora borealis place is in the world. However, I did not go there. More specifically, I could not visit there, because it was not affordable for a man to pay the cost for the expedition from Toronto to there, which is apparently far away on a map. I have dreamt looking up at Northern lights ever since.
The aurora borealis were truly breathtaking. I was at lost words while seeing. I had always imagined how wonderful they were before yesterday. But, they were more excellent than I expected. The lights were green and pink, which pink seems to be unfamiliar to appear. In Iceland, it often seems to consist of green, according to a local. I was absolutely lucky at that time.
I have more several days to stay in Reykjavik. I would love to see more ones by leaving.
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My Dream Came True; Northern Lights
What I wanted to do was to go to Yellow Knife: the place
The Aurora Borealis was truly breathtaking. I was
I still have
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I am really happy that your dream came true! I would also like to see the aurora one day. You have a very good English ability. I made some changes to what I thought would come across as more natural at times. Overall, a very good entry. I hope you enjoy the rest of your stay there!
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Steve san.
Thanks a lot. It is very kind of you. I would be grateful, if you can correct my mistakes when having time.
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すごい!I'm so glad that your dream became a reality.
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wonderful trip!
But i want know , beside implement the dream . Whether the northern light have convert your inherent more or less ?
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Hello Shin , you should write(cost of) not (cost for)
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