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There are many different types of music in the world today. - There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays? --> There are many different types of music in the world such as pop, R&B, rock, rock and roll, classic, jazz... and each country always has traditional music. From many years ago and until now, music like an entertainment tool which you can relax after a busy day or hardworking. Music can make your soul feel better and fresher. Sometimes music seems like a magical treatment for the human. And a question is mentioned, " Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?". It will not be easy to answer is yes or no. My essay will discuss both sides if this controversial issue. Firstly, the answer is yes for this issue. Traditional music of a country is important because my country, Vietnam many children grow up with lullabies from their mother and grandmother that make they easy sleep with gentle melody. Throughout traditional music is a special part of a country that tells apart with other countries and also is their pride. Traditional music of a country helps people deeply understand history of country and comprehend hero's sacrifices for country. Secondly, with the answer is no. there are many reasons can explain this answer, many young people like international music a lot because it is very popular and noisier such as pop, rock music.Moreover, young people is easy effected by international music. It seems like trend fashion and that make they want to catch up with new music. In some case, when you are in event of youth, they often turn on new music particularly international music than traditional music. Some coffee store and mall they also do like that. There are both pros and cons. It will depend on your attitude and situation to answer this question. However, traditional music should be maintained and keep. Please help me correct my essay. Thank you so much!

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