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私のむすめたち
娘がふたりいます. Kennedy, 五歳とKayden, 三歳です.[ Good :) ]
KennedyはようちえんをはべることでKaydenはほいくえんをはべります.
【Kennedyはようちえんにいっていて、Kaydenはほいくえんにいっています.】
[ We say "がっこうにいっています" if we usually go to school. I will break down the sentence for you.
がっこう = school (In your daughters' case, it should be ようちえん or ほいくえん.)
に = to ( "に" is one of Japanese particles that express motion towards a location. It is like a preposition "to" in English )
いっています = It's originally from the dictionary form いく, which means "to go". We often use "~ています" form to express that we do something regularly. *We use "~ています" as a continuous form as well. ]
Kennedyはテレビをみて遊びます.
[ Good :) ]
Kaydenはとてもわかいから、あんまり趣味がありません.
【Kaydenはちいさすぎるから、あんまり趣味がありません.】
[ We say ちいさすぎる, which literally means "too small". The original adjective is "ちいさい". ]
★ちいさい娘さんがふたりいると、たのしいですね。にほんご、じょうずにかけていますよ :)
私のむすめたち
娘がふたりいます. Kennedy, 五歳とKayden, 三歳です. Kennedyはようちえんをはべることでに行き始めて、Kaydenはほいくえんをはべりに行き始めます. Kennedyはテレビをみて遊びます. Kaydenはとてもわかいからけど、あんまり趣味がありません.I wasn't sure what exactly you wanted to say by "はべることで" and "はべります” so I just corrected as " starting Youchien/Hoikuen" but if this wasn't what you meant then please let me know.
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