The person I respect most
When it comes to the person I respect most, undoubtedly to say, the person is Bear Grylls, a British adventurer, who has been through several hazardous circumstances in nature and has survived himself every time he was on the verge of dying. Moreover, there is a documentary called "Man vs. Wild", which is his classic work to present how a single human confronts and tackles the deficiency of water and food while in wild, and in these series of films he shows various kinds of skills to forage for edible food, make fire, and search for fresh water. I was dropping my jaw while I was watching one of the films for the first time.
The first idea that he gave me was that I should live on what I've learned. We just aren't learning things for forgetting them. We should be learning things for using them in practice. Even though he was off the grid, I was astonished by his surviving skills and his knowledge to make it work well. Another lesson I've learned from him is the attitude. Even if I were in a dilemma, I should remain my positive attitude as long as I can. I hope that one day I could still be able to make some self-deprecating jokes if I were in troubles just as Bear Grylls did while he was facing those jeopardies threatening him.
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hey Lauren James. What did you mean "a bit of a run on sentence."? I don't understand.
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I'm on my phone so I can't correct at the time being but I would say your first sentence is a bit of a run on sentence. Your topic sentence should be more direct and to the point.
For example, "The person I respect most would undoubtedly be Bear Grylls. Bear Grylls is a ..."
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"Man vs Wild" is a really awesome show. I used to watch it a lot. I agree that Bear Grylls is a great role model. He always tries to make the best of any situation and that's something that a lot of us could learn from.
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