Our Office
There are a lot of green plants in our office.We have scindapsus,sun flower,plain sailing plant,asparagus fern,cactus,jonquil,multicapacity process,lucky bamboo,and so on.They are plant by me and my workmate.Because of their existence,the office is full of vitality.It is not dull anymore.
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Our Office
There are a lot of green plants in our office.We have scindapsus,sun flower,plain sailing plant,asparagus fern,cactus,jonquil,multicapacity process,lucky bamboo,and so on.They are plant by me and my workmate.Because of their existence,the office is full of vitality.It is not dull anymore.I'm on my phone and can't do a proper edit. However, I would list the plural forms of the plants or if they are singular add an "a or an" in front .
You also need to change "they are planted by me and my workmate" . You only plant them once so the action is finished. "They were planted..."
the second last sentence doesn't sound very natural. "Our office feels much more ..." "Our office no longer feels so dull and dreary, it..." "The plants have helped to..."
- try using one of these to change the last two sentences
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Our Office
There are a lot of green plants in our office.We have scindapsus,sun flower,plain sailing plant,asparagus fern,cactus,jonquil,multicapacity process,lucky bamboo,and so on.They are planted by me and my workmates.Because of their existence,our office is full of vitality.It is not dull any more.Want to progress faster?
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