IELTS ACADEMIC bar graph I appreciate it if someone tells me if there is any mistake in my writing. Thanks! This bar graph shows the range of university people in Britain, who were studying full time or part-time over the years 70/71, 80/81 and 90/91. Firstly, let us look at the similarities. It is noticeable that the range of men and women had an increase in full time education over each period shown. On the other hand, the increase of part time education only was followed by women, because male population had a decrement in 1980/81. The graph demonstrates that in 1970/71 the number of men in both time education were higher than female population, but this changed in 1990/91 because the number of women in part time were 1100 thousands in contrast with 900 thousands of men and the same in full-time education with 250 thousands. Overall, women were the part in further education population who had an increment in this three periods and probably it will be increase with the past of the years.