Email to a for friend. (sport camp)

Hello Robin,
It's nice to hear news from you. The sports camp will be very funny, it's great because I haven't nothing to do this summer, and I fancy the sports a lot. I have never stayed in sport camp and it can be a good opportunity to prove it.
I would prefer to stay in room more than in cottage due to I have fear to sleep alone over the land. Moreover any wild animal can appear at the night and I can receive a high shock. However if everybody sleep in tents I will also sleep there, because I prefer to stay together.
You are lucky, owing to I am so good cooking. In my house, I usually cook all the dishes, especially when I have time to do. My best dish is stewed meat with potatoes. I was teached by my mother, she is a great cook. Besides, I will also have the opportunity to eat your delicious food.
I think that I will able to fly over to Canada one week before. You can show me Canada, as it has fantastic landscapes and perhaps we could climp up some mountain for beginning to practise for the camp.
See you soon.
Ivan

Email for friend. (sport camp)

Hello Robin,
It's nice to hear news from you. The sports camp will be very fun; [funny=cómico] it's great because I haven't anything [discounting exceptional cases, double negatives are not used in formal English] to do this summer, and I fancy the sports a lot. I have never stayed in  a sports camp and it can be a good opportunity to try it. [prove=prueba]
I would prefer to stay in room more than in cottage because I am afraid to sleep alone while camping. Moreover any wild animal can appear at the night and I could be the victim of an attack. ["High shock" used for electrical or medical incidents as conventional vocabulary] However if everybody sleeps [similar to la gente, "everybody" takes singular] in tents I will also sleep there, because I prefer to stay together.
You are lucky owing to [better because, "owing to" is informal, colloquial]  because I am so good at cooking. In my house, I usually cook all the dishes, especially when I have time to do it. My best dish is stewed meat with potatoes. I was taught [irregular verb] by my mother; she is a great cook. Besides, I will also have the opportunity to eat your delicious food.
I think that I will able to fly over to Canada one week before. You can show me Canada, as it has fantastic landscapes and perhaps we could climb up some mountain in order to begin [conventional vocabulary] to practise for the camp.
See you soon.
Ivan