Part two ( no ground...)
This is the second part of my text; could you correct it please. Thanks in advance.
To put in a nutshell, what the artist wants to point out is the objection of a part of the american population who claims to be real american people who defends their country and american values against profaners but while they oppose themselves to the project of the construction of the mosque near Ground Mosque, they desecrate America because they wrote their message on the American Constitution and even I believe that their commitment, action is in contradiction to what they aim to protect.
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Part two ( no ground...)
To put In a nutshell, what the artist wants to point out is that the objection of by a part of the American population, who claims to be real aAmericans people who defends their country and american values against profaners, actually desecrate America but while when they oppose themselves to the project of the construction of the mosque near Ground Mosque (Zero?), they (because they wrote their message on the American Constitution I don't understand this sentence, could you write it in French?) and even I believe that their commitments, and actions is are in contradiction to with what they aim to protect.
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