Kuch hindi baatein
Namaskaar! Main paanch saal tak hindi seekh rahi thi, lekin meri hindi bahut acchi to nahi hai :) Do hafte pehle, main bharat gayi mere papa ke saath. Main bahut khush thi! Jab main keval choti thi, yeh mera sapna tha (ki main bharat jaaun). Bharat mein, main kai nayi dost mili hai. Lekin unke naam yaad nahi karti! Haaye. Hum kai sheheron gaya; Dilli, Agra, Lucknow, Vijayawada, Hyderabad. Dilli bahut bahut bada hai! Aur Lucknow, Hyderabad bhi kafi bade hain. Dilli mein, hum Paharganj gaye - thoda-sa paagal tha! Bahut se log hain. Lekin vahan main bahut maza aayi. Lucknow ke paas, hum ek chote se gaanv ka daura kiya. Jab main ghar pahunchi, main kafi dukh thi! Mujhe bharat bahut pasand hai. Maine kaha: 'main jaa rahi hoon taki main waapas aa sakungi', aur phir, 'Phir milenge, bharat.' Main aasha karti hoon ki main waapas aaungi!
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Kuch hindi baatein
Namaskaar (namaste)! Main (maine) paanch saal tak hindi seekh rahi thi (Seekhi thi) lekin meri hindi bahut acchi to nahi hai :) Do hafte pehle (Pahale), main mere papa ke saath (apne papa ke saath)bharat gayi. Jab main choti thi to Main bahut khush thi! , Bhaarat jaanaa mera ek sapanaa tha. Bharat mein, main(mujhe) kai nayi dost mili hai. Lekin mujhe unke naam yaad nahi karti! Haaye (hai). Hum kai sheheron me gaya(gaye); Dilli, Agra, Lucknow, Vijayawada, Hyderabad. Dilli bahut bahut bada hai! Aur Lucknow, Hyderabad bhi kafi bade hain. Dilli mein, hum Paharganj gaye -! vahan Bahut se log hain. Lekin main(mujhe) bahut maza aayi(aayaa). Lucknow ke paas, hum(humne) ek chote se gaanv ka daura kiya. Jab main ghar pahunchi, main kafi dukh thi! Mujhe bharat bahut pasand hai. Maine kaha: 'main jaa rahi hoon taki main waapas aa sakungi', aur phir, 'Phir milenge, bharat.' Main aasha karti hoon ki main waapas aaungi!Namaste Larissa, I have made some simple corrections to your already excellent written paragraph. well done! The highlighted portions are either incorrect or could be changed to sound more natural. The corrections are supplied after the highlighted portions. Thanks, Rishi
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Kuch hindi baatein
Namaskaar! Main paanch saal tak hindi seekh rahi thi, lekin meri hindi bahut acchi to nahi hai :) Do hafte pehle, main bharat gayi thi mere papa ke saath. Main bahut khush thi! Jab main keval choti thi, yeh mera sapna tha (ki main bharat jaaun). Bharat mein, main kai nayi naye dost doston se mili hai. Lekin mujhe unke naam yaad nahi karti! Haaye hain. Hum kai sheheron me gaya gaye; Dilli, Agra, Lucknow, Vijayawada, Hyderabad. Dilli bahut bahut bada hai! Aur Lucknow, Hyderabad bhi kafi bade hain. Dilli mein, hum Paharganj gaye - thoda-sa paagal tha! Bahut se log hain. Lekin vahan main mujhe bahut maza aayi. Lucknow ke paas, hum humne ek chote se gaanv ka daura kiya. Jab main ghar pahunchi, main kafi dukh dukhi thi! Mujhe bharat bahut pasand hai. Maine kaha: 'main jaa rahi hoon taki main waapas aa sakung sakoon', aur phir, 'Phir milenge, bharat.' Main aasha karti hoon ki main waapas aaungi!0
Why you wanted to come India, you took visiting India as childhood dream, that mean there must be something special and interesting associated with you and India, what is it, would you like to let us know? If you don't mind.
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AAP BAHUT ACHHA HINDI BOLTI HO (YOU SPEAK VERY GOOD HINDI),
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