Dairy
Today is a raining day . It is raining all day .so I can't go to outside .I have to stay at room,it's so borning .I prepare to find a book to pass the time.however, I can not concetrate on reading.naturelly,I gave up it . I desire to watch a movie ---BIG FISH.After I watch it done,I think it is the best movie which I like.Only one.I am is so moved when it begining until it done.In the movie. I nearly to find myself. The movie is very beautiful.I consider it is not only want to tell us love ,courage ,but also the responsibility when you are stay in the position even when you are born ,God has arranged everyting.In the movie.I find If you make a mistake,you must to pay the price.May be the life. In my life ,I make a bigest mistake ,I can't to correct it ,Finally I must to bear it .besides ,I am a master for my life.luckily .I am young, I have more time to do everying I like.
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Dairy
Today is a raining day . It is raining all day .so I can't go outside .I have to stay in the room,it's so boring .I prepare to find a book to pass the time.however, I can not concentrate on reading.naturally,I gave up it . I desire to watch a movie ---BIG FISH.After I watch it done,I think it is the best movie which I like.Only one.I am is so moved when it beginning until it done.In the movie. I nearly to find myself. The movie is very beautiful.I consider it is not only want to tell us love ,courage ,but also the responsibility when you are staying in the position even when you are born ,God has arranged everything.In the movie.I find If you make a mistake,you must pay the price.maybe the life. In my life ,I make the biggest mistake ,I can't correct it ,Finally, I must bear it .besides ,I am a master for my life.luckily .I am young, I have more time to do everything I like.Want to progress faster?
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