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People shouldn't be allowed to work from home because it's less productive than being in the office. It is generally agreed today that work in an office is more productive than work at home. But some people are poles apart with this point of view. Let us start by considering pros and cons. First of all, the office provides you the discipline. It gives you all the opportunities to work without any unnecessary interruptions and empty breaks. That is why your work in the office can be really fruitful. Secondly, it is needless to say that social communication is necessary for everyone. It is impossible to be successful without communicative skills and these skills are impossible to be developed by working at home. And moreover the social environment will motivate you to be better, to work harder. But some people are against my opinion. According to the article in yesterday’s Guardian a lot of people firmly believe that the way to the office takes them a lot of valuable time. They also consider that being in the office is rather stressful for them and negatively affects their health. Defenders of this point of view may be applauded for their seeking to stay in a nice household condition but what they propose would be productive neither for the company, nor for themselves. Working at home gives you the illusion of having much time. You interrupt more frequently than if you would do it in an office. The idea of work at home has some merits on the surface and could be acceptable to an extent, but let us not disregard the fact that there are just a few people who are able to turn their minds to work while being at home.

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People shouldn't be allowed to work from home because it's less productive than being in the office.

It is generally agreed today that work in an office is more productive than work at home. But some people are poles apart with this point of view.

Let us start by considering the pros and cons.

First of all, the office provides you discipline. It gives you all the opportunities to work without any unnecessary interruptions and empty breaks. That is why your work in the office can be really fruitful. Secondly, it is needless to say that social communication is necessary for everyone. It is impossible to be successful without communicative skills and these skills cannot come from working at home. And moreover the social environment will motivate you to be better, to work harder.

But some people disagree. According to an article in yesterday’s Guardian a lot of people firmly believe that the way to the office wastes a lot of valuable time. They also consider that being in the office is rather stressful and harms their health.

Their proponents may be applauded for wanting to stay comfortably at home but what they propose would be productive neither for the company, nor for themselves. Working at home gives you the illusion of having much time. You interrupt your work more frequently than if you were in the office.

The idea of home-working has some merits on the surface and could be partly acceptable, but let us not ignore that there are just a few people who are able to turn their minds to work while being at home.

Very well written!

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