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Tasteless noodles The weather is colder and colder ,I don't want to go out for dinner , so I could eat leftovers of the lunch in mess hall or cook for myself and I choosed the latter one. Actually , most of the employees go home after work and only a few employees live in the company dormitroies and fewer people have dinner in mess hall , so the mess hall really only offer some leftovers from lunch to us . I cooked some noodles for me , flavourless noodles , because I only have a small microwave , what's more , I finally found out why my noodles are tasteless . I somehow wanted to eat some seasonings straightly and I found that the seasonings are tasteless themselves . No wonder I felt the noodles were insipid even when I put lots of seasoning in my dish. Anyway , it's Friday , nothing can be more pleasant.

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Tasteless noodles

The weather is getting colder and colder, I don't want to go out for dinner, so I could eat leftovers of the from lunch in the mess hall or cook for myself; and I chose the latter one. Actually, most of the employees go home after work and only a few employees live in the company dormitories, and so fewer people have dinner in the mess hall. so Because of this, the mess hall really only offer has some leftovers from lunch to offer us . I cooked some noodles for me myself, flavourless noodles, because I only have a small microwave. And what's more, I finally found out why my noodles are tasteless. For some reason, I somehow wanted to eat some seasonings straightly out of the packet and I found that  seasonings are it was tasteless themselves itself. No wonder I felt the noodles were insipid even when I put lots of seasoning in my dish. Anyway , it's Friday , nothing can could be more pleasant.
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用cafeteria 呢
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This is very good. To help make your writing sound more natural, try using shorter sentences instead of these very long sentences with lots of commas
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Tasteless noodles

The weather is getting colder and colder; therefore, I don't want to go out for dinner. , so I could eat the leftovers from of the lunch in the mess hall, or I could cook something for myself. and I chose the latter one. Actually , most of the employees go home after work, and there are only a few employees living in the company dormitories  and only a few of them  people have dinner in the mess hall , so the mess hall really only just offer some of the leftovers from lunch to those who want to have dinner there.  to us . I cooked some noodles for myself, and it was tasteless without any flavour is flavourless noodles , because I only have a small microwave for cooking things. what's more But, I finally found out why my noodles were tasteless .

I somehow always want to eat my food with some seasonings, straightly  but and I found out  that the seasonings I used then were tasteless themselves . No wonder I felt the noodles were insipid, even after I had I put a lot of seasoning into my dish. Anyway , it's Friday, and nothing can be more pleasant.

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mess hall 听起来像脏厅似的。食堂，餐厅我觉得有更合适的英文词语来用 :)

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