Accident
To the manager of landlord,
My name is Danilo Martins and I was about to move to the apartment 156B, in the next month. I am very excited to move in and finally leave my parents’ house. I have just started my university and can’t study so much living with parents due to some personal problem (noisy). But, however, a very bad thing just happened to me.
On my way back home at the day before yesterday, I was riding my motorcycle when all of sudden a car cross the road and I unfortunately ran into him. Now I am at the hospital. I broke my leg in two parts and I will have to stay with my family for three more months.
Given that, I wonder if we can postpone the date to move in. According to the doctor, in two months I will be able to walk again. So I think that in three months I can move in.
Please, let me know if we can postargate the renting. I am very looking forward to hearing back from you.
Regards,
Danilo Martins
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Accident
To the manager or landlord,My name is Danilo Martins, and I was about to move to the apartment 156B within the next month. I was very excited to move in, and finally leave my parents’ house. I have just started my university and can’t study so much living with parents due to the noisy environment. However, a very bad thing just happened to me.
On my way back home the day before yesterday, I was riding my motorcycle when all of sudden a car crossed the road. I unfortunately ran into him. Now I am in the hospital. I broke my leg in two parts, and I will have to stay with my family for three more months.
Given that, I wonder if we can postpone the date to move in. According to the doctor, in two months I will be able to walk again. So I think that in three months I can move in.
Please, let me know if we can prorate the rent. I am very much looking forward to hearing back from you.
Regards,
Danilo Martins
I used the word "prorate" in the sentence, because it appears that you are looking to have the rent reduced for the first month according to the new move in date. If you want to delay the rent instead of "prorate" you would use the word "postpone."
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