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Twister in Cuba i am gonna write something about what happen in cuba when one twister is coming. It´s amazing how they protect their population, they don´t think about the money, they don´t think about to lose time, they just think the most important thing are the human beens. what i want to mean with this point ? i mean...another countries lost almost one thousand people like Haiti, or United States also lost many people. That is for me the difference from countries only have the mind on money to countries have the mind on people. Two differents systems of economies, one is only get more money doesn´t matter if the people die and another it is thinking first the people. we should think about it, we should change this world,we shouldn´t be selfish and help the whole world to be happy and save their lifes. If someone want to read the article about why the twister in cuba don´t produce dead you will find it in this link. It is in spanish ;) http://www.publico.es/internacional/matthew-cuba-muertes-huracanes.html

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Twister in Cuba

I am gonna write something about what happened in cuba when one twister was coming. It´s amazing how they protect their population, they don´t think about the money, they don´t think about losing time, they just think the most important thing are the human beings.
what do I mean ?
I mean... other countries lost almost one thousand people, countries like Haiti, or United States also lost many people. That, for me, is the difference between countries that only have their mind on money and countries that have their mind on people.
Two different systems of economy, one only thinks about getting more money and it doesn´t matter if the people die, and the other thinks about the people first.
We should think about it, we should change this world, we shouldn´t be selfish, we should help the whole world to be happy and save people's lifes.
If anyone wants to read the article about why the twister in cuba didn't kill anyone you will find it at this link. It is in spanish ;)
http://www.publico.es/internacional/matthew-cuba-muertes-huracanes.html
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I am gonna write about what happens in Cuba when a twister is coming. It's amazing how they protect their population. They don't think about money or about losing time. The most important thing are the human beings.

What do I mean?

Other countries have lost almost a thousand people, like Haiti. The United States has also lost many people. That for me, is the difference between countries that only think of money, and countries that think of their people. 

There are two different economic systems. One is to get money, even if people die, and the other puts people first. 

We should think about this, and change this world. We shouldn't be selfish, and try to help the people of the world improve their lives. 

If anyone wants to read the article about why the twister in Cuba didn't produce many deaths, you can find it in this link. 

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