revise: my first writing

First, I have to say thank you to Adrain, who modified my daily writings so carefully.
And my revise  revision to the first *piece of* writing is *as* follows following: I am writing this on 9th October, a Sunday evening. This is my first time writing in here, an advanced language learning websit*e*, and i am interested in writing.* This is* not only because writing is one of my problem*s* in studying English right now, it is also an essential ability a student should have when they are ready to study for get a MA degree.