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Today,my Japanese teacher tell us more theory about how to make best friends. some people considering that it is hard to make friends,Maybe they want to obtain certain profits from you.now, I change this thought .everyone is not only exists in this world. we need others help.so. we can to help others if we can help them,If you haue a kind heart ,naturally, you will have many best friends!
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Today,my Japanese teacher tell us more theory about how to make best friends. some people considering that it is hard to make friends,Maybe they want to obtain certain profits from you.now, I change this thought .everyone is not only exists in this world. we need others help.so. we can to help others if we can help them,If you haue a kind heart ,naturally, you will have many best friends!Today, my Japanese teacher told us more theory about how to make best friends. Some people consider that it is hard to make friends. Maybe people want to obtain certain profits from you. Now, I challenge this thought. Everyone does not exist in this world alone- we need the help of others so we can help others if we can. If you have a kind heart, naturally you will have many best friends!
Hi Aliece, I´ve written the correction below your original piece based upon what I think you are trying to say. Please let me know if you agree with me. And I agree, if you have a kind heart then you have many friends :) Lauren
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