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The writing of my exam As the development of science,robots are playing an more and more important road in people’s daily life.They can help us with keeping the house clean,they can do the dangerous things for us in industry factory.Maybe as time go by,robots will become normal as cars,every family owns their robot,we dress our robot as we want,we make our robot different with other. However,good man also do the ban things,some robot may will be control by those guys who want to earn their living illegally,we’ll face the criminal created by ourself at that time,situation will become more complicated,but i believe we can work it out as long as we stand together.

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The writing of my exam

As science develops, robots are playing an more and more important role in people’s daily lives. They can help us with keeping the house clean, they can do the dangerous things for us in factories. Maybe as time goes by, robots will become as normal as cars and every family will own their robot. We will dress our robot as we want and we make our robot different from others.
However, good men also do bad things and some robots may will be controlled by these guys who want to earn their living illegally. We will face the criminal created by ourself at that time and things will become more complicated but I believe we can work it out as long as we stand together.

Very well written!

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