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My first days in the US hello ! my name is Bari. I came to the US on 9th of October to study english at ELS columbus Ohio. I love the experince of speaking english in daily life, people are nice here and very friendly . till now i made few friends like 6 friends . they are helpful and very kind, they help me to explore the campus and to know the important places .the weather is a bit cold for me here, as I came from middle east. there are many things i have to learn a bout the culture here , as greeting all people and to eye contact.

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My first days in the US

Hello! My name is Bari. I came to/arrived in the US on the 9th of October intending to study English at ELS Columbus, Ohio. I love the experience of speaking English in daily life, and people are nice here and very friendly. Till now i made quite a few friends - like 6 friends. They are helpful and very kind, they help me to explore the campus and to know the important places. The weather is a bit cold for me here, as I come from the Middle East. There are many things, I have to learn about the culture here, such as greeting everyone all people and to making eye contact.
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My first days in the US

hello ! my name is Bari. I came to the US on (9th of October)  October 9th to study english at ELS columbus Ohio. I love the experience of speaking english in daily life, people are nice here and very friendly . Till now i made few friends, like 6 friends . They are helpful and very kind, they help me to explore the campus and to know the important places .the weather is a bit cold for me here, as/since I came from middle east. There are many things i have to learn a bout the culture here , (as) like greeting all people and to  make eye contact.

Excellent job man!! Keep it up an continue enjoying your experience. Just remember to capitalize your letters when needed. Have a great day man.

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Congras.. Because no one want to bully you as your description. Just enjoy one of your most happy time in your life.

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