Transport plane
Could you correct me, please?
Firstly, travelling by plane has many advantages: There aren´t stressful traffic jams, The flight attendants are always friendly, and the planes are fast and comfortables. Also, a plane ticket can be purchased by telephone or on the internet.
In spite of many advantages air transport has a number of disadvantages, for instance: the ticket is too expensive, the plane has the reputation of being dangerous and the flights are controlled by weather condition.
Despite to the disadvantages, I prefer travelling by car because it is cheap and I can drive by myself.
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Transport plane
Could you correct me, please?Firstly, travelling by plane has many advantages. There aren´t any stressful traffic jams, flight attendants are always friendly and planes are fast and comfortable. A plane ticket/Plane tickets can also/Furthermore, a plane ticket/plane tickets can be purchased by telephone or on the internet.
In spite of many advantages, air transport has a number of disadvantages. For instance, tickets are too expensive, planes have the reputation of being dangerous and flights are controlled by weather conditions.
Despite these disadvantages, I prefer travelling by car because it is cheap and I can drive by myself.
Good little argument but just be careful with your countable nouns when you're making general statements i.e. no need for "the"/use the plural form. I also don't think you need to introduce an argument with a colon.
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