Tiny paragraph (please) hi, there Could you tell me the problems with this paragraph? "Construction work on the streets has started, and improvements are being made to the neighborhood altogether.

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Tiny paragraph (please) hi, there Could you tell me the problems with this paragraph? "Construction work on the streets has started, and improvements are being made to the neighborhood altogether. Workers are tearing down the pavement in order to run water pipes underground, thereby improving the lives of those who has not yet access to basic sanitation and running water." Thank you

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James.

Tiny paragraph (please)

hi, there

Could you tell me the problems with this paragraph?

"Construction work on the streets has started, and improvements are being made to the entire neighborhood altogether. Workers are tearing down up the pavement in order to run water pipes underground, thereby improving the lives of those who has do not yet have access to basic sanitation and running water."

Thank you

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