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Photosynthesis I am doing a course for learning 400 words, so they teach me around of 10 words daily, I am going to write them down in this paragraph. In Florida, there was a flood due to Mathews hurricane and there was a big impact in south Florida. in other hands as well I want to learn and obtain a good fluency in this langue, it's a hard journey by which I will have to collide with everything against of them, I have intensified my studies in English, so maybe an eruption of bits of knowledge will come to me. The last words they gave me is Photosynthesis, so maybe they want that I teach that word to my children, I don't know Thank you for your time in reading my paragraph

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Photosynthesis

I am doing taking a course for learning to learn 400 words, so in which [or 'where'] they teach me around of 10 words daily. I am going to write them down in this paragraph. In Florida, there was a flood due to Hurricane Matthew hurricane and there was a big impact in south Florida. In other hands as well addition I want to learn and obtain a good fluency become fluent in this language. It's a hard journey by in which I will have to collide with everything against of them. [I don't know what you're trying to say with 'have to collide with everything against them'] I have intensified my studies in English, so maybe an eruption of bits of knowledge will come to me.

The last word they gave me is 'photosynthesis', so maybe they want that I me to teach that word to my children, I don't know

Thank you for your time in reading my paragraph

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Photosynthesis

I am doing a course for learning 400 words, so they teach me around of 10 words daily, I am going to write them down in this paragraph. In Florida, there was a flood due to  hurricane Mathew and there was a big impact in south Florida. In addition I want to learn and obtain a good fluency in this language, it's a hard journey in which I know I will have to struggle with grammar and idiomatic expressions., I have intensified my studies in English, so maybe my English level  will increase more quickly.

The last words they gave me is Photosynthesis, so maybe they want me to teach that word to my children, I don't know

Thank you for your time in reading my paragraph
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Hello Arthur. Photosynthesis is the process where plants turn light into energy. Do you need any extra information? I´m a biology major so please feel free to contact me with any science questions. I´ll be happy to help.
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Hi! james, yes thank you
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Are you asking about the word -photosynthesis?

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