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Writing practice( please correct it for me My Best Friend I have a friend whose name is Lily.We met 12 years ago,and always get along well with each other,so we have had a lot in common till now.As a friend,it's so kind of her to always be thoughtful,reliable that whenever I feel frustrated or depressed,she is there for me.In my view,she is also aneasy-going,funny girl ,capable in a lot of things,such as study and communication.Honestly,she tends to be moody and sometimes too sensitive when in a relationship.From my perspective,what makes us attract each oher to keep friendship is our complementary characters.

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Hi! I'll try my best to make it clear and helpful. :D I'll just correct it and change words to a more suitable form. Feel free to ask if you would like further explanations. ^ u ^

I have a friend whose name is Lily. We met 12 years ago and always get along well with each other, since we had a lot in common until now. As a friend, it's so kind of her to always be thoughtful and reliable, that whenever I feel frustrated or depressed, she would be there for me. In my view, she is also an easy-going, funny girl who is capable in a lot of things, such as studies and communication. Honestly, she tends to be moody and sometimes too sensitive when in a relationship. From my perspective, what attracts us with each other and keeps our friendship is our complementary characteristics.

Hope it helps? > u <

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