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my new beginning Hello, everyone. I am a freshman in China and English is my major.I feel confuse to my future because I don’t know what my future will be. My English is not very well and I am poor in English words, listening and grammar. The first English class in my university, my English teacher asked our to listen to a radio and notice the information in order to writing them down on the blank of the article. I had tried my best to do it but I just wrote a little. It makes me upset. I am a English language learner but I couldn’t do it well. However ,I will not give it up. I believe that it is my new beginning and I just need time to struggle for it .

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My new beginning

Hello, everyone. I am a freshman in China and English is my major. I feel confused about my future because I don’t know what my future will be. My English is not very good and I am poor in English words, listening and grammar. The first English class in my university, my English teacher asked us to listen to a radio program and notice the information in order to write them down in an article. I tried my best to do it but I just wrote a little. It makes me upset. I am an English language learner but I couldn’t do it well. However, I will not give up. I believe that it is my new beginning and I just need time to struggle with it.


Hello Aviva,

Learning a language is like anything you need to have guidance and practice in order to become good at it. Try to write an entry in your notebook regularly (2-3 times per week) If it is the same length as this then people are more likely to correct it for you. Try to learn from your mistakes.

Also see if you can listen to some podcasts or something like TEDtalks which has an interactive tapescript to help you. The more you are exposed to the language, the easier it will become to understand and produce the language.


Best wishes


Bob

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my new beginning

Hello everyone, I am a freshman in from China and English is my major.I feel confused to about my future because I don’t know what my future will be. My English is not very well and I am poor in English words, listening, and grammar. The first English class in my university, my English teacher asked our us to listen to a radio and notice listen to the information in order to writing (write ) them it down on the blank parts of the article. I had tried my best to do it but I just wrote a little. and it makes me upset. I am an English language learner but I couldn’t do it well. However ,I will not give it up. I believe that it is my new beginning and I just need time to struggle for it .

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Advice: 

 "my english is poor in words, listening, and writing." 

Words and writing are in the same category so you dont have to write both down (They're both grammatical).  Also, one way you could write down the sentence is like this:

"My english is poor  grammatically and verbally." 

Grammar has to do with writing, words, and how to spell or structure. "Verbally" or Verbal refers to how youre saying words, such as pronounciation and sentence structures.

The word our refers to when you both have something of the same item/thing/member

for example: 

our cat / our cats / our dog / our dogs / our homework / our teacher 

The word "us" is when you're refering yourself and other people with you such as a date, group, or family towards a problem or action. 

For example: 

The teacher asked us to do our homework. / My mom joined us at the mall. / The dog chased us at the park. / 


Structuring sentences: 

When writing sentences, make sure not to cause run on sentences. Example:

"I am eating and I am watching television"

"I like cats and I like dogs"

The reason why this is considered incorrect is because "I am" and "I like" is being used more than once for actions that represent you or what you're doing. 

The correct term:

"I am eating and watching television"

"I like cats and dogs."

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I hope my advice helps you a little. I tried my best to explain in my own words so it could be just a bit easier for you to understand. Im proud that you're not giving up in english, someday you'll get there!! 

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Thanks all of your help and it really helps me a lot.I will keep going and try my best.
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What's most important is that you never give up! I can already see that you have a strong will, so keep on going and stay disciplined and you will only get better and better! :)
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I think, the most important things to accomplish something is the confident and study hard. As I can see in your post, you have confident. So, you just need to study hard. I highly recommend you listen podcasts and radio channels always. Thus, you can get used to pronunciation of English words and understand all of them when you're listening. Good Luck.

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