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shanghai wild animal park wild animal park is located Pudong new area of shanghai, that also is one of the hottest spots in Shanghai. many locat tourists and foreign tourists all like go to visit it, not only there are China-animal in animal park,but also there are Foreign-animal in it, I'm sure you will be deeply attracted and forget to return if you pay a visit i like elephant so much, it look seem meek, and that it love family, The point is very similar to the Chinese people, chiese people have a meal together on hoilday annually

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Shanghai Wild Animal Park is one of the hottest spots in Shanghai, located in the Pudong New Area. Many locat tourists, both local and foreign tourists all like go to like to visit the park it, not only because there are China-animal in animal park,but also there are Foreign-animal both Chinese and foreign animals in it,. I'm sure you will be deeply attracted and forget to return if you (decide to / want to) pay a visit. 

I like elephants so much, it look seem meek, and that it loe family, They point is are very similar to the Chinese people , chiese  because they love family people. Every year they will have a meal together on a hoilday. annually
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Shanghai Wild Animal Park

The Wild Animal Park is located Pudong New Area of shanghai, also one of the hottest spots in Shanghai. Many local tourists and foreign tourists all like go to visit, not only are there Chinese animals in the animal park, but there are Foreign-animals in it, I'm sure you will be deeply attracted and forget to return if you pay a visit. 
I  like elephants a lot, it look seem meek, and the fact that they love family, the point is, they very similar to the Chinese people, Chinese people have a meal together on holidays annually.
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shanghai wild animal park

A wild animal park* is located in the Pudong new area of Shanghai, which is also one of the hottest spots in Shanghai. Many local tourists and foreign tourists alike go to visit it. There are not only Chinese animals there but also foreign animals. I am sure you will be deeply attracted and forget to return if you pay it a visit. I like elephants so much. They seem meek and they love their family, The point is very similar to the Chinese people. The Chinese have a meal together on holidays annually.

*sometimes this is called a 'nature reserve'.

Very well written!

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