A happy day
Today I have a good day because I learned lots of knowledge . In the morning , I woke up at 6:30 and then I studied English words for about one hour . I spent almost one hour to learn yueyu next because I am living in Shenzhen and most people always speak yueyu when they come to our hospital for their health . I went to the market to buy the materials that I need to cook for lunch . After lunch I slept for one hour and I went to a place where is quiet to study knowledge about nursing and I mastered the disease "SHOCK". So, I did not spend much time to play my phone and I think I am full of happiness.
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A happy day
Today I have a good day because I learned lots of knowledge . In the morning , I woke up at 6:30 and then I studied English words for about one hour . I spent almost one hour to learn yueyu next because I am living in Shenzhen and most people always speak yueyu when they come to our hospital for their health . I went to the market to buy the materials that I need to cook for lunch . After lunch I slept for one hour and I went to a place where is quiet to study knowledge about nursing and I mastered the disease "SHOCK". So, I did not spend much time to play my phone and I think I am full of happiness.Thanks for your correction.
Today I had a good day (or today was a good day) because I learned lots of things. I awoke at 6.30am and then studied English vocabulary for about an hour. I then spent almost an hour learning Yueyu (Yue / Yueh?) because I am living in Shenzen and most people only speak yueyu (Yue / Yueh?) when the come to our hospital to be treated. I went to the market to buy the ingredients I need to cook lunch. After lunch, I slept for an hour and then went to a quiet place in order to continue my nursing studies and I mastered the topic on the medical condition known as SHOCK. So I didn't spend much time playing on my phone and I think I am full of happiness [....on my phone and I am very happy!].
Very interesting! Well done!
Paul
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