A zoo is good place for family
Today I went to a zoo near my home with my wife and my son.
My son loves many animals, for example, elephants, gorillas and giraffes. I like watching many animals at zoo, too.
Just by chance I have met my old friend there. They came there as a family including their children.
I think going to zoo is good recreation for family with children !!
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A zoo is a good place for family activities.
Today I went to a zoo nearMy son loves
Just by chance, I
I think going to the zoo is good recreation for families with children !!
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Thank you for your suggestions, Corey. They are very useful !!
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That is pretty good I only have a few corrections. Instead of saying: "My son loves many animals, for example, elephants, gorillas and giraffes" I would say, "My son loves many animals, such as, elephants, gorillas and giraffes".
I also would also add "Just by chance I met *some of* my old *friends* there. They came *to the zoo* as a family *with their* children.
Your translation is actually very good and my suggestions or more preferences with how I am used to talking in America more than anything!
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