Let ' s go to the park.
Since I have been a mother, myself seems to be not so importent as before. There was 7 days during the holiday of National Day. My husband asked me where I want to travel. I have no idea. I looked at my son and answered:" Maybe we can go to an amusement park. If our son feel happy, I will be happy too."
My husband said:"If my wife feels happy. I will be happy too. So let's go to the park.":)
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Let's go to the park.
Since I have been become a mother, my own needs don't seem to be as important as before. There was a 7 day National Day. My husband asked me where I wanted to travel. I had no idea. I looked at my son and answered:" Maybe we can go to an amusement park. If (son's name) is happy, I will be happy too."My husband said:"If you feel happy. I will be happy too. So let's go to the park.":)
Well written! I've just corrected some present and past tense. Also saying "our son" and "my wife" sounds less natural then just using name/you.
you can also say: Now that I have a child, my priorities have changed.
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My husband's words made me feel very sweet
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As a soon to be father, I understand were your husbands' comment comes from.
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