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Writing a description hey, I'm writing a description for my product on etsy, it's real hard to sell sth on a website that need a English description. I'm afraid my description is just like a composition of primary school students. I try to learn from other shop, so here, that's the result. Is it ok or good enough if you are a buyer? THE LITTLE PRINCE 12 month wall calendar is a coloring calendar about the story The Little Prince. Each month has a different character or scene illustration of the story. It’s a great gift for THE LITTLE PRINCE fans, children, even grow-ups, it will make your life a little more innocent and fun. FUN FEATURE: First, it's can be used as a coloring book. Second, once the year is over, you can cut out the art-work and use it as 8x8 Art Prints! *Note- I have eight 2017 National Calendars available for sale. Make sure you take a look at all listings before purchasing to make sure you are buying the one you mostly love it :) !

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Writing a description

hey, I'm writing a description for my product on etsy, it's real hard to sell sth on a website that needs an English description. I'm afraid my description is just like a composition of primary school students. I try to learn from other shops, so here. Is it ok or good enough if you are a buyer?

THE LITTLE PRINCE 12 month wall calendar is a coloring calendar about the story The Little Prince. Each month has a different character or scene illustration of the story.
It’s a great gift for THE LITTLE PRINCE fans. Children, even grow-ups, it will make your life a little more innocent and fun.

FUN FEATURE: Firstly, it can be used as a coloring book. Secondly, once the year is over, you can cut out the art-work and use it as 8x8 Art Prints!

*Note- I have eight 2017 National Calendars available for sale. Make sure you take a look at all listings before purchasing to make sure you are buying the one you like the most! :)


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