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How sommelier’s brain diffrent from us? Please help me to correct my English grammar for my article. It is about Sommelier's brain. Thank you so so much! Sommelier’s skills are really special skills for human coming from brain network. Its all about memorization by using five senses, and the skill to recall the names of wine, and its conditions (age, origin), by associating them with uncountable options of possible wine. This training cultivates ability to forming brain networks in sommeliers. There is a research about this brain network shown in the fMRI image. The researchers found that the complexity of these networks (strength of connection) was much higher in the sommeliers than in controls. Again, those brain networks are formed by years of training, and cannot be formed just by drinking wine.

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How sommelier’s brain (is/are)diffrent from us?

Please help me to correct my English grammar for my article.
It is about Sommelier's brain. Thank you so so much!

Sommelier’s skills are really special. The human's skills come from a/the brain network. It's all about memorization by using five senses, and the skill to recall the names of wines, and its conditions (age, origin), by associating them with uncountable options of possible wine. This training cultivates the ability to forming brain networks in sommeliers.
There is a research about this brain network shows in the fMRI image. The researchers have found that the complexity of these networks (strength of connection) was much higher in the sommeliers than in controls.
Again, those brain networks are formed by years of training, and cannot be formed just by drinking wine.

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