A note to M.
You are cheating on me, my dear. I’ve never thought it could be so hurting. I believe someday we’ll be able to change something but I agree with Heraclitus we’ll never step twice in the same river. Today I still feel the pain but after some time I will be OK. In several years we’ll laugh at this story…if I am alive. If you are alive. I don’t feel angry, I am not furious. I just want to say thank you for many years when we stayed together. But don’t touch me. Just don’t touch me anymore.
Goodbye, dear. Today is a sunny day. If I've noticed it, life is going on.
Yours, N.
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A note to M.
You are cheating on me, my dear. I never thought it could hurt so much. I believe someday we’ll be able to change something but I agree with Heraclitus we’ll never step twice in the same river. Today I still feel the pain but after some time I will be OK. In several years we’ll laugh at this story…if I am alive. If you are alive. I don’t feel angry. I am not furious. I just want to say thank you for the many years we spent together. But don’t touch me. Just don’t touch me any more.Goodbye, dear. Today is a sunny day. If I've noticed it, life goes on.
Yours, N.
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