Could someone correct me this story? Thank you :)
The story is about a guy of 17 years old that was alone at home with his mom because his dad and his little brother had gone to Boy Scout camp out.
It was around 2 in the morning when he needed to go to the bathroom one more time before going to sleep.
While sitting on the toilet, he heard a little tap on the bathroom door, he thought the mom had done the noise but when he opened the door, there was nobody there.
When he returned, he realized that the bedroom door was shut so he decided go to his mom’s room and tell her that somebody was in his bedroom. However, the mother didn’t take him seriously.
He returned again to the bedroom nervously, then opened the door and when he snuck a peek into the room, he could see a hand sticking out from behind the dresser.
The guy ran to the mom’s room again and fortunately, the mother finally believed him and after that, she decided call the police.
The guy put an ear against the door and he could hear the man’s footsteps come out from his bedroom and come closer to the room. In a moment, the person tried the doorknob but thankfully he had locked the door previously. Consequently, the man gave up and left the house.
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Could someone correct me this story for me? Thank you :)
The story is about a guy of 17 years old 17-year-old guy that was alone at home with his mom because his dad and his little brother had gone to Boy Scout camp out.It was around 2am in the morning when he needed to go to the bathroom one more time before going to sleep.
While sitting on the toilet, he heard a little tap on the bathroom door. He thought the his mom had done made the noise but when he opened the door, there was nobody there.
When he returned to his room, he realized that the bedroom door was shut, so he decided go to his mom’s room and tell her that somebody was in his bedroom. However, the his mother didn’t take him seriously.
Nervously, he returned again to the bedroom nervously, then opened the door and when he snuck a peek into the room, he could see a hand sticking out from behind the dresser.
The guy ran back to the his mom’s room again and fortunately, this time the his mother finally believed him and after that, she decided to call the police.
The guy put an his ear against the door and he could hear the man’s footsteps coming out from of his bedroom and coming closer to the room. In a At that moment, the person tried the doorknob but thankfully he the boy had locked the door previously. Consequently, the man gave up and left the house.
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