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letter to give information Dear Mr Webster, I am writing in reply to your queries related with our visit to your English Language Academy in Manchester in July. First of all, I would like to say that learning English is really important for our group. We believe that we are reasonably good at reading and writing but we are not so good at speaking or listening. For this reason, improving our speaking is our priority and your Academy has been highly recommended to reach our goal. Obviously we do not expect to become bilingual but we do to be fluent at least. Secondly, we definitely prefer to stay individually with local families in spite of staying all together in a youth hostel could be cheaper. We hope to take advantage of this really good oportunity to impruve our English conversation in real life situations. The more we practice our speaking, the more satisfied we will be. Furthermore, I have to say that we will be delighted to take part in whatever spare time activities you organize. To help you with taking decisions about it, I have to say that we love spending time reading, so we would enjoy visiting some famous library in Manchester for example. In adittion, we are intersted in your Educational Sistem so visiting some University could also be interesting. Finally, I would like to ask about the weather in Manchester in July and if you could also help us with the clothes that we should travel to there. We only travel with hand luggage and we need to be the more efficient with it. I hope I have answered all of your questions; please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further information. Yours sincerely

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Hi, Ana. I think your writing is quite good!  You're communicating effectively.  For the most part, the changes I've recommended are stylistic. Good luck with your English studies! - Chris

Dear Mr Webster,

I am writing in reply to your queries related with questions regarding our July visit to your English Language Academy in Manchester in July.

First of all, I would like to say that learning English is really important for our group. We believe that we are reasonably good at reading and writing, but we are not so as good at speaking or listening. For this reason, improving our speaking is our priority. and Your Academy has been highly recommended to help us reach our goal. Obviously we do not expect to become bilingual, but we do at least expect to become fluent at least.

Secondly, although staying in a youth hostel might be cheaper, we definitely prefer to stay individually with local families in spite of staying all together in a youth hostel could be cheaper. We hope to take advantage of this really good opportunity to improve our English conversation in real life situations. The more we practice our speaking, the more satisfied we will be.

Furthermore, I have to say that we will be delighted to take part in whatever spare time activities you organize. To help you with taking decisions about it, I have to say that We love especially enjoy spending time reading, so we would enjoy visiting some famous library in Manchester for example. In addittion, we are interested in your Educational Siystem, so visiting some University could also be interesting.

Finally, I would like to ask about the weather in Manchester in July.  Pleaese tell and if you could also help us what sort of with the clothes that we should bring with us travel to there. We only travel with hand luggage and we need to be the more efficient with it.

I hope I have answered all of your questions;.  Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further information.

Yours sincerely,

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letter to give information

Dear Mr Webster,

I am writing in reply response to your queries relating with to our visit to your English Language Academy in Manchester in July.

First of all, I would like to say that learning English is really important for our group. We believe that we are reasonably good at reading and writing but we are not so good at speaking or listening. For this reason, improving our speaking is our priority and your Academy has been highly recommended to help us reach our goal. Obviously we do not expect to become bilingual but we do would like to be fluent at least.

Secondly, we definitely prefer to stay individually with local families in spite of staying all even though staying together in a youth hostel would be cheaper. We hope to take advantage of this really good great/fantastic opportunity to improve our English conversation skills in real life situations. The more we practice our speaking, the more satisfied we will be.

Furthermore, I have to say that we will be delighted to take part in whatever spare time activities you organize/organise. To help you with making decisions about it, I have to say that we love spending time reading, so we would enjoy visiting some famous libraries in Manchester for example. In addition, we are interested in your Educational System so visiting some Universities could also be interesting.

Finally, I would like to ask about the weather in Manchester in July and if you could also help us with the clothes that we should travel to there pack. We are only travelling with hand luggage and we need to be the more efficient with it.

I hope I have answered all of your questions; please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further information.

Yours sincerely

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