No.15 Self Introduction It is my pleasure to present myself here in front of you. My name is Ye Yu, you can also call me Tony. The position I applied for audience. I think audience is the most val

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No.15 Self Introduction It is my pleasure to present myself here in front of you. My name is Ye Yu, you can also call me Tony. The position I applied for audience. I think audience is the most valuable position which can support the activity that keep it lively, yet nobody paid any attention to the audience.So It's a great chance for me.I am good at clapping,Listening and talking. The important thing in the E-Club is not the credit but the taking part.I'm sure that I'm gonna make it. And that's me here,moving on. Thanks.

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No.15 Self Introduction

It is my pleasure to present myself here in front of you. My name is Ye Yu, but you can also call me Tony. The position I applied for is an/the audience member.

I think the audience member is the most valuable position for supporting the activity and keeping it lively, even though nobody pays any attention to the audience.Because of that, it's a great position/option for me. I am good at clapping, listening, and talking.

The important thing about the E-Club is not the credit you get, but the taking part in activities. I'm sure that I'm going to get the part. And That's all for me. moving on.

Thanks.

Notes:

I didn't know if the position of audience member has more than one spot or if there is only one person getting the position. If you were trying out for just one position (for example, the only audience member position available) you would use 'the'. If there is more than one spot for the part, you would use 'an'.

The sentence that said, "so it's a great chance for me" - I wasn't sure if you were meaning to say that you had a great chance of getting that position or that you feel it is a great position or option for you. If you wanted it to be about your chances of getting the part, the sentence could be, "....so I have a good chance of getting the part."

I changed 'gonna' to 'going to' because in a formal setting like this one (applying for a position) it is much better to not use slang like 'gonna' and 'wanna'.

The phrase 'moving on' at the end doesn't make sense. You could either end it with 'thank you' or just end it after the sentence 'that's all for me'.

I really hope this helps you out! Let me know if you have any questions.

Thanks, oh yeah. Just always use wrong words.

Keep it up !

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