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Please correct my paper ! I’ve just finished reading a book called “ Baby Whale Rescue”. It’s a true story about a baby whale that was accidentally separated from her mother right after she was born. She was dying when she was discovered by people near Southern California. Even though she was a baby, she weighed about 750 kg, and 4 meters long at that time. So there were not many places where she could go. I mean she could fit. Who has a water tank that can take such a large fish? There were no aquarium that could accept her, so she ended up been transferred to Sea World in San Diego, and was named “JJ”. Since I’m going to visit Sea World during my upcoming fall break, I was very interested in this story. JJ was taken cared by the caregivers, and got well pretty fast. By the time JJ reached her one year anniversary at Sea World, she weighed about 8 tons. She could barely fit their largest pool. I believe that the caregivers must have been feeling the moment for “Good Bye” to JJ as she grew. A few months after the anniversary, JJ was returned to where she belonged to. Although it was good thing that she could go back to the ocean, I can’t help thinking if she could survive in the ocean by herself, because she learned how to eat or find foods by humans, not by her own mother. I hope that JJ is still doing great in somewhere. Wouldn’t it be nice if JJ comes back to say hi just like Willy in the movie “ Free Willy”?

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I’ve just finished reading a book called “ Baby Whale Rescue”. It’s a true story about a baby whale that was accidentally separated from her mother right after she was born. She was dying when she was discovered by people near Southern California. Even though she was a baby, she weighed about 750 kg, and was 4 meters long at that time. So there were not many places where she could go. I mean where she could fit. Who has a water tank that can take such a large fish (no problem grammatically but whales are mammals)? There were no aquarium that could accept her, so she ended up being transferred to Sea World in San Diego, and was named “JJ”. Since I’m going to visit Sea World during my upcoming fall break, I was very interested in this story.

JJ was taken cared for by the caregivers, and got well pretty fast. By the time JJ reached her one year anniversary at Sea World, she weighed about 8 tons. She could barely fit in their largest pool. I believe that the caregivers must have been feeling the moment for “Good Bye” to JJ as she grew. A few months after the anniversary, JJ was returned to where she belonged to. Although it was good thing that she could go back to the ocean, I can’t help thinking ("wondering" is better here) if she could survive in the ocean by herself, because she learned how to eat or find foods by from humans, not by  from her own mother.

I hope that JJ is still doing great in somewhere. Wouldn’t it be nice if JJ comes back to say hi just like Willy in the movie “ Free Willy”?

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