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What would you do if you won lottery? What would you do if you won lottery? I really want to travel around all over the world. I will write some travelogue what I saw, heard and felt during a travel. and I will print my travel book. Add my income and lottery money, I will contribute money for poor people. and I will study something that I have the desire to learn and I will set by money for my future.

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What would you do if you won lottery?

What would you do if you won the lottery? (Good use of Second Conditional)

I really want to travel around/all over the world. I would write some travelogues about what I saw, heard and felt during the trip. and I will print a travel book. Using my income and the lottery money I would give money to poor people. And, I would study something that I have the desire to learn and I would set money aside for my future.


KEY POINTS

Around is good. All over is good. But, you should choose one. 

Travel is not countable. Trip is. So, we say a trip.

As you are using second conditional you need to use would and not will.

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What would you do if you won the lottery?

What would you do if you won the lottery?
I really want to travel around all over the world. I want to write a travelogue of what I saw, heard and felt during my travel, and I want to publish my travel book. Combining my income and lottery winnings, I would contribute money for poor people. and I would study something that I have the desire to learn and I would set by some money for my future.

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