Japanese People Into The Train
What do you doing into the train? Reading? Talking with your friends?
Almost Japanese people are playing the smart phone into the train. They send some message in LINE or Twitter. And they playing game. Recently, famous game is "pokemon GO!" They face is expressionless. Nothing a smile into the train, you will feeling bad. The cellular phone is convenience but losing human feelings ours.
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Japanese People Into The Train
What do you doing into on the train? Reading Read? Talking with Talk to your friends?Almost all Japanese people are playing the play with their smart phone into whilst on the train. They send some messages in on LINE or Twitter. And they playing play games. Recently, a famous game called is "pokemon GO!" was released They Everybody's faces are is expressionless. Nothing Not even a smile into the train, you will feeling It makes you feel bad. The cellular cell/ mobile phone is convenience convenient but we are losing our human interaction feelings ours.
Japanese people on the train.
What do you do on the train? Read? Talk to your friends?
Almost all Japanese people play with their smart phones whilst on the train. They send messages on LINE or twitter, and they play games. Recently a famous game called 'pokemon GO!' was released. Everybody's faces are expressionless, not even a smile. It makes you feel bad. The mobile phone (I am British so I call it a mobile, although you can call it a cell phone) is convenient, but we are losing our human interaction.
I hope this is clear for you, I corrected it in your original piece so you can see where your mistakes are, the I rewrote it so you can read it a lot easier.
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Japanese People Into The Train
What do you do usually in the train? Reading? Talking with your friends?Almost all Japanese people play with their smart phones . They send some message in LINE or Twitter. And recently they started playing games, like "pokemon GO!" Their faces are expressionless. (Not even a smile into the train, you will feeling bad. The cellular phone is convenience but losing human feelings ours.) Not sure what are you trying to say
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Japanese People Into The Train
What do you doing into the train? Reading? Talking with your friends?Almost Japanese people are playing with their smartphones into the train. They send some messages through LINE or Twitter, and they playing games too. Recently, a famous game is "pokemon GO!" They faces are expressionless. Nobody smile into the train, you will feeling bad. The cell phone is convenient but we are losing our human feelings.
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I am learning english too, but I tried to correct you some things.
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