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Book shop My the past job was book shop clerk. My work arranged books on the shelves. To stock a new item. To introduce the contents of the book to the customer.. Lifting persons often came to book shop. Shoplifting is a big problem for the store in Japan. Many book shop went bankrupt by shoplifting. I love books. I love book shop. So if your friends do shoplifting, please tell the person that your action is big problem.

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Was this meant to be written as a kind of free verse poem?  If not, then I will arrange it as prose, correcting some fragments and combining repetitive sentences. 

Book shop

My last job was as a book shop clerk. My work involved arranging books on the shelves, stocking new items,  suggesting books to the customer.  Shoplifters often came to the book shop.  Shoplifting is a big problem for stores in Japan.  Many book shops have gone bankrupt (or: out of business) due to shoplifting.

I love books, and I love book shops.  So if your friends shoplift, please tell them to stop.

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Book shop

My the past  last job was as a book shop clerk.
My work was to arrange books on the shelves.
To stock a new item.
To introduce the book content  to  customers.

Lifting people often came tothe  book shop.
Shoplifting is a big problem for  stores in Japan.
Many book shops went bankrupt because of shoplifting.

I love books. I love the book shop.
So if your friends do shoplifting, please tell these people that their actions cause big problems.
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Book shop

My past job was a book shop clerk.
My job is to arrange books on the shelves.
To stock new items.
To introduce the content of the book to the customer..

Shoplifters often came into book shop.
Shoplifting is a big problem for the store in Japan.
Many book shops have gone bankrupt because of shoplifting.

I love books. I love the book shop.
So if your friends are shoplifting, please tell them that their actions are a big problem.

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