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HOW MUCH MONEY IS NECESSARY TO BE HAPPY? This essay discusses if the happiness is related to have a lot of money or simply, it is not necessary much money to be happy. Certainly, it is a complex point indeed. Not everybody needs large amounts of money to be happy. Even some people live without it. It is true that almost all people would love to have a fortune, but on the other hand, others only want enough money to live each month with no problems. Having a huge amount of money is indeed a huge responsibility, so that it is very important that money must be managed very well and carefully. It is tremendously attractive to can spend all money that you want, above all, when you are starting to spend it, when the motivation about it is still rather high and even it is very exciting to buy any type of stuff such as the latest gadgets, modern and fashionable cars or incredible houses. To remark that all those sensations and feelings will be sadly temporal and after a long time, they will disappear. There are a lot of things to which money is not necessary, and truly, most of cases these ones are more important than for instance, the material things. To sum up, it is better to enjoy your current life, day by day, taking advantage of each moment with your family or friends. Since, this is actually the true happiness.

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HOW MUCH MONEY IS NECESSARY TO BE HAPPY?

This essay discusses if happiness is related to having a lot of money, or simply if it's not necessary to have much money to be happy.
Certainly, it is a complex point indeed.

Not everybody needs large amounts of money to be happy. Even some people live without it.
It is true that almost all people would love to have a fortune, but on the other hand, others only want enough money to live each month with no problems.

Having a huge amount of money is indeed a huge responsibility, so it is very important that money must be managed very well and carefully. It is tremendously attractive to be able to spend all the money that you want. When you start to spend it, motivation is still high and it's very exciting to buy anything, such as the latest gadgets, modern and fashionable cars or incredible houses.
Unfortunately all these sensations and feelings will be sadly temporal and after a while, they will disappear.
There are a lot of things to which money is not necessary, and in most cases these things are more important than material things.

To sum up, it is better to enjoy your current life, day by day, taking advantage of each moment with your family or friends. Since, this is actually the true happiness.
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HOW MUCH MONEY IS NECESSARY  TO BE HAPPY?

This essay discusses if (better: whether) the happiness is related to having a lot of money or simply, it is not necessary if one simply doesn't need much money to be happy.
Certainly, it is a complex point (better: question) indeed.

Not everybody needs large amounts (better: a lot of) of money to be happy. Even some people can even live without it.
It is true that almost all people would love to have a fortune, but on the other hand, others only want enough money to live each month (better: from one month to the next) with no problems.

Having a huge amount of money is indeed a huge responsibility, so that it is very important that money must be managed very well and carefully. It is tremendously attractive to can be able to spend all the money that you want, above all, when you are starting to spend it, when the motivation about it is still rather high and even it is very exciting to buy any type of stuff such as the latest gadgets, modern, and fashionable cars or incredible houses.
To remark that all those sensations and feelings will be sadly temporary and after a long time while, they will disappear.
There are a lot of things to for which money is not necessary, and truly (better: indeed), most of cases these ones are more important than for instance, the material things.

To sum up, it is better to enjoy your current life, day by day, taking advantage of each moment with your family or friends. Since, because this is actually the true happiness.
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Nothing. Happiness is when your life fulfills your needs. Happiness comes when you feel fulfilled and satisfied.

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